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Hello,

I need some help reviewing my cover letter. 

I am a master in management student working as a product manager at a European bank. I have trouble filtering the why me section especially, it feels a bit cluttered and a second opinion would help.

Thank you.

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on Jun 13, 2020
McKinsey | NASA | top 10 FT MBA professor for consulting interviews | 6+ years of coaching

HI, feel free to send it

Best,
Antonello

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Luca
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on Jun 09, 2020
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Hello,

Feel free to send it to me for a quick review.

Best,
Luca

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on Jun 09, 2020

Sure, feel free to shoot 

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Clara
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on Jun 09, 2020
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Shoot ;)

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on Jun 09, 2020

Hello,

feel free to PM :)

David

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Robert
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on Jun 09, 2020
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Hi Anonymous,

With this limited information, there is not a lot of advice to give - however, feel free to contact me for an individual in-depth review and feedback of your document!

Robert

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Vlad
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on Jun 10, 2020
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Hi,

Feel free to send one. However, they do not really read cover letters so don't worry too much about that. 

Best

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on Jun 10, 2020

Hi A,

Feel free to send me and I give your a feedback 

Best,

André

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on Jun 10, 2020
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Hi,

Feel free to share with me for my feedback.

-A