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Cover letter review

Hello,

I need some help reviewing my cover letter. 

I am a master in management student working as a product manager at a European bank. I have trouble filtering the why me section especially, it feels a bit cluttered and a second opinion would help.

Thank you.

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am 13. Juni 2020
McKinsey | NASA | top 10 FT MBA professor for consulting interviews | 7+ years of coaching

HI, feel free to send it

Best,
Antonello

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am 9. Juni 2020
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Hello,

Feel free to send it to me for a quick review.

Best,
Luca

Gelöschter Nutzer
am 9. Juni 2020

Sure, feel free to shoot 

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am 9. Juni 2020
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Shoot ;)

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am 9. Juni 2020

Hello,

feel free to PM :)

David

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am 9. Juni 2020
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Hi Anonymous,

With this limited information, there is not a lot of advice to give - however, feel free to contact me for an individual in-depth review and feedback of your document!

Robert

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am 9. Juni 2020
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Hi,

Feel free to send one. However, they do not really read cover letters so don't worry too much about that. 

Best

Gelöschter Nutzer
am 10. Juni 2020

Hi A,

Feel free to send me and I give your a feedback 

Best,

André

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am 10. Juni 2020
Bain Consultant | Interviewer for 3 years at Bain |Passionate about coaching |I will make you a case interview Rockstar

Hi,

Feel free to share with me for my feedback.

-A