Hi, would like to seek your advice on writing punchy slide headlines. There are 2 questions:
(1) Is using action verbs suggested for most cases? In a BCG public report, I've seen many headlines crafted in an illustrative way (which seems less direct to me) such as:
“Broad range of cultural attractions attended by visitors”
(2) When should I take out verbs? I've seen many headlines in the BCG report taking out the verbs (which seems intentional), such as:
“Creative industries increasingly important to the economy”
“Greater social media following can associated with visitation”