Could i send to someone my PEI Leadership story written to get a quick feedback?

Hi there. I'm also happy to check it out and provide you some insights.

Yes, you can do that. But here's the catch - coaches may give you useful advice, but for free they will most likely stay at the surface. I can easily tell you whether you story is strong enough and whether is hits the key points or not. 

But if it doesn't, it will take significant work and explanation to get you at the right level. I guess some people may do it for free (I've done it many times), but if you want to be sure you are getting the right level of support, you should be hiring someone.

You are interviewing with Mckinsey, the payback if you get the job is immense. Honestly, I see people spending $200,000 doing an MBA to have a chance to interview with MBBs... would it make sense to spend 0,1% of that to make sure one is at his best?

(Having said this, yes, you can send it)

Hi there, 

If you're looking to work on your PEI stories, I've actually developed a targeted course on this that includes in-depth analysis of the story dimensions, examples and a story builder tool. 

You can find more about it here:

• Video Course: Master the McKinsey PEI

If you have any questions about it, feel free to reach out. Doing really well on the PEI is a great way of separating yourself from the rest of the candidate cohort. 
Best,
Cristian

Sure let us have a look!

Of course, you can definitely share it with someone for feedback. The key is to pick someone who knows the PEI format well so they can tell you if your story is both structured and impactful enough. If you want, you can also send it to me and I’ll give you quick feedback on clarity, structure, and strength of the leadership angle.

best, Alessa :)

Hi, 

sure happy to have a quick look and give some feedback.

Best,
Lukas

Hi, yes! Happy to help.

Hello! 

Happy to read through and provide feedback! :)

Best,

Evelina

Feel free to share it to me as well