Hi,
I also have a question regarding the personal impact dimension story.
Roughly, my story is about my current job, where I convinced a superior to try to win over a company, as I saw a great opportunity to put a foot in the door and later upsell products. He on the other hand, did not believe we could get in their, as they were currently using a competitor's product. Yet, through several talks with the company, I understood they wanted to switch provider, and saw an opportunity, which I convinced by boss of. He mainly did not want us to follow it as we were quite a small team and entered an entire new geographical market with an entire suit of products, so resources were scarce.
What do you generally think about the story? I can quite well describe how I managed to convince him, how I calculated the potential financial and strategic impact etc, yet I am not sure if the story is strong on the “what would have happened if we did not win the company” part. Sure, we were still small in the geographical market and proving the headquarters that we can win the deal is one argument. Yet, as I work in a quite big scale up, it makes no sense to say that without winning this contract, we would have been in trouble etc. Is my argumentation strong enough, or does the story, given this fact, not fit the dimension? What do you think in general about the story?