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Hi PrepLounge, Resume Guidance

Hello everyone,

I've gone through several iterations of my resume points, but as I don't know many people working for MBB firms, I'm reaching out here for feedback. I'd greatly appreciate it if someone could take a look at these bullet points and provide me with some advice. I'm open to feedback, as I've tried to include as much as possible within limited space. English is not my primary language, so there may be some grammatical errors.

Thanks for the help!

1: These two are my opening lines. It's one of the longer projects I worked on and achieved quite a lot from self development and outcomes wise.

2: Super cool project, not sure if I have written it in the correct MBB manner here.

-Please disregard the colour of each line here.

3: I have also separated any initiatives where I have personally been in a leading capacity to be under this specific section. Leading to me means, stakes are quite high, client challenge is quite complex, and the output required/ delivered is dependent mostly on my performance. Happy to take feedback here and make changes wherever necessary. 

 

Thank you for your time!

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Ian
Coach
on Oct 21, 2023
Top US BCG / MBB Coach - 5,000 sessions |Tech, Platinion, Big 4 | 9/9 personal interviews passed | 95% candidate success

Hi there,

Remember that a full resume review is a paid service (like any form of knowledge transfer e.g. taxes, wealth management, physio, etc.).

Your 2nd bullet point is the best one. Most of the rest are “close” but I don't see enough about what YOU actually did (key activities/responsibilities"

on Oct 24, 2023
Hi Ian,

Thank you for your feedback. Can I ask which specific bullet point you are referring to here?

Thanks
Aude
Coach
on Oct 21, 2023
Director, Mitsubishi Financial Group / Ex-BCG / Ex-EY

Hey there,

 

Section 1 is good.

Section 2, I think you should mention what was the actual IMPACT generated. Example: you mentioned helping the CFO with advice. What did it result in for him/her?

Section 3: it is relevant if you are going for a managerial role I think. If you are doing for Associte/Consultant role, I would focus more on execution.

on Oct 24, 2023
Hi Aude,

Thank you for your answer.

Could I ask which each of your sections relate to as I believe your comment on section 2 and 3 seem to refer to the third screenshot of my Leadership experience?

Thank you
on Oct 25, 2023
#1 Rated McKinsey Coach | Top MBB Coach | Verifiable success rates

Charles, 

These bullet points already look good. And I think you can get a lot of useful feedback below, but if you get 10 cooks to prepare a dinner it's likely to be a disaster. 

I know CV reviews cost money, but it's a great ROI considering that they put you within the top quartile of candidates. 

Best,
Cristian

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on Oct 21, 2023
Ex-BCG Principal | 8+ years consulting experience in SEA | BCG top interviewer & top performer

Hi,

I'll add one point from a quick glance. Your section on ‘leadership experience’ could have its impact better quantified.

All the best!

Alberto
Coach
on Oct 24, 2023
Ex-McKinsey AP | Professional MBB Coach | +13yrs experience | +2,000 real interviews | +150 offers

Hi Charles,

Happy to help you with this. Just send me a message.

Best,

Alberto

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