Resume Review

Hi there,

Here's my 10 second (not full!) review and feedback

Overall you've done well with content (what you've put and the wording/language). Try to make it pass the eye test better. For example:

• Make section headers larger, caps, and underlined
• Make company bolded, dates itaclized, etc…see what looks good, but make sure of bolding/italics to emphasize things
• You can remove articles ("a","the") in your bullet points

Overall, nice work on the experience bullet points…this is the hardest part!

Hello,

At a quick look - this looks pretty good! I think you can tighten some of your bullet points if you drop prepositions like “a”, and “the”. I would also tighten the awards and honours section - instead of a sub-heading per honour, I would do them as bullet points, and explain some specifics in parentheses (e.g., Regional Case Competition - 2nd runner up out of 42 teams). I don't think details on what the case competitions involved are necessary.

If you'd like a full resume review, feel free to reach out!

Hi there,

feel free to reach out via DM - happy to share a few high-level thoughts. 

Regards, Andi

Hi there!

CV looks good - it's about 70-80% there. Two other points to keep in mind:

• You're ‘missing’ two sections: Leadership & Volunteering, as well as Skills & Interests. 
• Besides GPA, give an indication of your positioning within the cohort (e.g., top 10%)

Best,
Cristian

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