Hi there,

There are a lot of opportunities to improve these paragraph structures:

• Your bullets should start with an action verb in past tense (e.g., supported, contributed, etc.)
• Your bullets are process driven. Re-write them achievements driven. Put emphasis on your outcomes. Back this up with some numbers
• Select examples to showcase different skills (leadership, communication, analytics, entreprenuerial drive, etc.)

Happy to keep talking about this in private, just send me a message.

Best,

Alberto

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Neither.

The CV should be neither a list of your projects, nor a list of the tasks you fulfilled. 

It should be a synthesis of your impact.

Which means that each bullet point should highlight what you did, how you did it and what was the impact of it. 

And each bullet point should serve to show that you exhibit ‘consultant-like’ skills that make you an attractive profile. 

If you need help with this, reach out and I can walk you through the process.

Best,

Cristian

There is no rule.

I could show you how to make both your options work.

Your current bullets are under-selling your profile and not showing the impact you were able to bring about.

At the same time, your layout is very inefficient.

Happy to help you with your CV.