So a few thoughts:

1. You want to make sure that you can quantify your experiences (e.g., delivered $x of revenue). Think carefully before adding bullets which can’t be quantified or at the very least have an output associated with them. What qualities are you demonstrating?
2. You want to ensure that the firms can easily see the key attributes they’re looking for eg leadership, ability to deliver, entrepreneurship. You can do this by starting each bullet with the output rather than what you did eg “delivered $x of revenue by leading x many people to do y“ - rather than “coordinated x many people to do y resulting in $x of revenue”
3. For experiences which go far back (eg 5 years+), don’t put much detail in - you’ve grown since then

I’m happy to take a quick look if it’d be helpful.

Good luck!

Hi Brooke,

Given your background and expertise, you are almost guaranteed an interview invitation for all MBBs. 

For every experience, choose the 3-4 most impactful achievements and quantify the impact.

To properly provide feedback on your resume, happy to take a quick look if you send it via direct message.

Cheers,

Florian

Hi Brooke!

Feel free to send through your CV. I'll take a quick free look to see if you're on the right track.