Hi, I am trying to prepare for job interviews, but my English is not good, is the grammatically correct below? In case I introduced myself.

My name is Emad, I graduated from the University of Petra, I have been awarded a

Degree of master of Business Administration with a very good grade,

also, I have been awarded a bachelor degree in E-Business & Commerce

with a good grade.

I have successfully completed training on Microsoft Access from Bradford Academy.

As for the skills, I have Proficiency in the use of computers.

Thank you.