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Cover letter
New answer on Jun 13, 2020
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Anonymous A asked on Jun 09, 2020

Hello,

I need some help reviewing my cover letter.

I am a master in management student working as a product manager at a European bank. I have trouble filtering the why me section especially, it feels a bit cluttered and a second opinion would help.

Thank you.

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Antonello
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HI, feel free to send it

Best,
Antonello

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Hi,

Feel free to share with me for my feedback.

-A

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Anonymous replied on Jun 10, 2020

Hi A,

Feel free to send me and I give your a feedback

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André

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Vlad
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Hi,

Feel free to send one. However, they do not really read cover letters so don't worry too much about that.

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Hi Anonymous,

With this limited information, there is not a lot of advice to give - however, feel free to contact me for an individual in-depth review and feedback of your document!

Robert

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Anonymous replied on Jun 09, 2020

Hello,

feel free to PM :)

David

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Clara
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Shoot ;)

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Anonymous replied on Jun 09, 2020

Sure, feel free to shoot

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Hello,

Feel free to send it to me for a quick review.

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